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Correct: 27 some were between 2,3, or 4 depending on how I did on the free response
Essay 1
I would write an essay comparing how she viewed leisure as lazy and slow, as seem through her diction and tone, and compare to the fast paced entertainment we have today like movies, science, news, ect.
Essay 2
I would have used grapes of wrath and written about how like was like before the dust bowl and great depression for the Jode family and compare it to the reality they faced in the story. I would try to pick out the actions of the characters in society and show how they became selfish and worried about there own survival and clash that to the Jodes and their hospitality towards all people. this will show change in society and tradition.
Essay 1
I would write an essay comparing how she viewed leisure as lazy and slow, as seem through her diction and tone, and compare to the fast paced entertainment we have today like movies, science, news, ect.
Essay 2
I would have used grapes of wrath and written about how like was like before the dust bowl and great depression for the Jode family and compare it to the reality they faced in the story. I would try to pick out the actions of the characters in society and show how they became selfish and worried about there own survival and clash that to the Jodes and their hospitality towards all people. this will show change in society and tradition.
Peer to Peer Evaluation
ReplyDeleteEssay #1 seems solid but perhaps you should go more in depth to what the author was trying to say.
Essay #2 you made a typo: like= *life. But the idea of including the history if the book and their harships is a good thesis.Try to remember what the prompt is asking and don't go off on tangents when stating your main points.